Monday 18 May 2009

The Air and 'I'.

As soon as I got outta the examination hall, this is what came in my mind. hehehe!

I write in the air,
your name with my name,
the feelings I never told you,
the pain my unspoken feelings give,
the longing of my waiting,
the cravings of my unexplored desires,
all my prayers to blow away your troubles.

I write in the air,
all my hopes I hope.
The love letters I never wrote to you;
hoping, that one day,
this air may deliver them to you.

I paint in the air,
the smiles I don’t smile anymore,
the palace we once dreamed to have,
the heavenly garden of our imaginations,
the pictures of our unmade memories,
the colours I don’t possess anymore;
hoping, that one day,
the rainbows may colour my canvas.

I whisper in the air,
the confessions of my truths,
the silent cries of my nights,
the lyrics of my love poems,
written for you,
the confessions of my truths,
hoping, that one day,
you may hear them in howling winds.

I plant in the air,
the roses of my all seasons love;
hoping, that one season,
you may come back,
following, the scent of my untouched love.

13 comments:

  1. I can sense you venting your tension away via this piece. Nice lines! Keep writing!!!

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  2. Good one bro....... touched my heart.......

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  3. @Brosreview- Thank you for liking it and hey you sensed absolutely right. It was the exam tension I was venting out :P

    @Dr.Kumar- I guess it'd be better if you call me sis :P I'm a girl :)

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  4. Oho sorry sis.... The same thing happened at the lounge too....
    Anyway ur works r good.... Keep inking ur thoughts.....
    Nd really writing relieves tension....

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  5. hmmm, you should write exams more often, look at this brilliant piece!!!

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  6. Well I already commented on this one @ FB!

    *I whisper in the air,
    the confessions of my truths,
    the silent cries of my nights,
    the lyrics of my love poems,
    written for you,
    the confessions of my truths,
    hoping, that one day,
    you may hear them in howling winds.*

    My fav lines! Brilliant work!

    PS: I am practising da art of writing in da air....just as u tld me! ;)

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  7. @Dr.Kumar- hehe it's okay. Even I made a mistake and called a guy, girl, lol. It happens. And thank for appreciating the writing :)

    @Shadow-Thank you :) ... I think exams do really do me some good. There's something coming in mind but it's a little blurry. I'll polish it and upload soon. Thanks again :)

    @Mav- I just noticed I repeated one line twice 'the confessions of my truths' *Humph* ... I guess you guys are being too generous to notice it :) ... Thanks dude

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  8. I have already commented on this poem in The Writer's Lounge.... I will again let you know that you know how to create magic with words!!
    Keep writing!!

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  9. @Dreamer- Thank you for liking it and giving such good comments :)

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  10. I am liking how each stanza begins differently but the same.
    'I whisper in the air,
    the confessions of my truths,
    the silent cries of my nights,
    the lyrics of my love poems,
    written for you,
    the confessions of my truths,
    hoping, that one day,
    you may hear them in howling winds' My fav of the whole.

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  11. @Sarah- Thank you so much for the comments :)

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